The condition of a person's shoes can tell some pretty interesting stories! |
Outside of the investigation context, that would work really well for summarizing and personifying a character; don't you think? A lot of details about a person's life and personality can be portrayed just by focusing on that one article of their outfit, and the description doesn't need to be long and complicated. It just takes asking a few questions, like:
What kind of shoes are the character wearing? A character well off in the financial sense with a specific taste for fashion might love to wear designer brands; but they might also like special treasures found in thrift stores. Characters who aren't so well off financially might have hand-me-downs; or they could be wearing shoes that belonged to a loved one because that person isn't around anymore. Or, of course, if there isn't some kind of complicated backstory, the character could have just gotten their shoes at a local shoe store.
What condition are the shoes in? A soldier in the middle of a devastating war would probably have plenty of cracks in the rubber of their boots and permanent stains on the leather from trudging through a dusty/swampy terrain. And an athlete's shoes might have smooth circles near the worn-out soles, from countless hours of training and competing. Even a character with a relatively "normal" life might have bits of candy/popcorn lodged in their shoes if they work in, say, a movie theater.
Is there anything on the shoes that are unique to the character? Some people like to doodle in the white spaces on their sneakers; a character with special artsy skills would possibly do that. A clumsy person would probably have scuff marks all over the front of their loafers from bumping into things and tripping, making their shoes unmistakable. And a character who has an odd fascination with a certain color might always aim to wear shoes (or just shoelaces) that have that color; which can be really interesting when the color is one like bright yellow.
So do any of these ideas bring up unique details about a character in your current work? What kind of details; what kind of shoes do they wear?
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